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Revison plan (Project 1)
- Sam Brown
- Jul 24, 2017
- 1 min read
Project 1- Oh yes I can
Deadline: July 21
I will be meeting with Lana Rush at 11:00 on July 17th.
I need to adjust my narrative so that scenes and statements are linked throughout. I also need to revise and look over the tense I used.
I know my first paragraph is a flash back so I used a different tense. I should probably change that so that it makes more sense to the reader. I should also consider the flow of my article assuring that the reader understands what is happening and that my story is linked.
I’m hoping that this narrative will have a nicer flow. I want this narrative to truly capture my reader and show them the story of my tattoo with fun snippets of the past while using the correct tenses.